sometimes,
nothing can save a collection of words
from reading like bad poetry.
Joe said...
And then sometimes lines
broken at just the right spots
suggest a haiku
Milena said...
And yet, since "all bad poetry springs from genuine feeling," it might be worth reading yours. You are nothing if not your genuine best all of the time.
The quote was from Wilde.
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09/23/08 07:53 AM
Joe said...
And then sometimes lines
broken at just the right spots
suggest a haiku
09/23/08 09:10 AM
Milena said...
And yet, since "all bad poetry springs from genuine feeling," it might be worth reading yours. You are nothing if not your genuine best all of the time.
The quote was from Wilde.